Mass Effect Story by my Daugter :D

Okay, after yesterday's rant, I've got a much happier post for you guys My daughter is working on a Mass Effect story, hahaha! Oh my God, I was grinning like an idiot this morning reading her first two chapters.  That's all she's gotten written so far.  She even titled the chapters! Here it is:

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CHAPTER 1 "Meeting You":

Shepard and Garrus were at a meeting about the battle on Earth.

"Garrus will be with me," said Shepard.

"Okay," said Garrus.

"Let's go," said Shepard.

They got their armor on quick and went to Earth.




CHAPTER 2 "Going to Earth":

"Get in," said Joker.

"Start the ship," said Shepard.

"Okay," said Joker.

"Are you okay?" asked Garrus.

"Yes," said Shepard.

"No you're not," said Garrus.
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  I wonder what's wrong with Shepard? I hope she explains it in her story